6th Man of St. John's Basketball

Non-Sport Related Discussion => Off Topic => Topic started by: Classof2013 on June 24, 2009, 06:51:18 PM

Title: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Classof2013 on June 24, 2009, 06:51:18 PM
Hey guys,  Here's my third article I've done for ESPN Rise.  It is about what high school basketball players do during the summer.  I would appreciate any feedback on the article and how I can improve.

Thanks.

http://sports.espn.go.com/highschool/rise/news/story?id=4279974 (http://sports.espn.go.com/highschool/rise/news/story?id=4279974)
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: KAHNIGHT on June 25, 2009, 12:33:11 AM
Good  article and I like how the video tied it in with the NBA guys Charlie V. , Devin Harris & Blake. It connected the circle pros, college HS
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: boo3 on June 25, 2009, 11:17:00 AM
  nice work!   you should be proud.
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Tha Kid on July 02, 2009, 04:22:37 PM
Great job Classof2013.  I hope the editors of the St. John's paper are reading!
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Classof2013 on July 02, 2009, 10:31:59 PM
thanks everybody.  i have another big article coming up.  this one features a former st. john's player. stay tuned.
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Marillac on July 02, 2009, 10:56:11 PM
thanks everybody.  i have another big article coming up.  this one features a former st. john's player. stay tuned.

Keep it up, Dylan.  You obviously have enough talent, but your drive seems to be your best asset.  I can't believe how many kids that wanted to be sports writers in college that didn't even attempt to join the school paper or work at one of the local papers.  You'll have a leg up on them.

I'm sure there are some alumni on here that could get you in touch with some of the STJ grads doing well in the field like O'connell from the AP. 
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Marco Baldi on July 03, 2009, 02:54:46 AM
thanks everybody.  i have another big article coming up.  this one features a former st. john's player. stay tuned.

Keep it up, Dylan.  You obviously have enough talent, but your drive seems to be your best asset.  I can't believe how many kids that wanted to be sports writers in college that didn't even attempt to join the school paper or work at one of the local papers.  You'll have a leg up on them.

I'm sure there are some alumni on here that could get you in touch with some of the STJ grads doing well in the field like O'connell from the AP.

I agree, good stuff random. Keep it up junior, maybe someday we will be reading your stuff in SI
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: Classof2013 on July 13, 2009, 06:07:49 PM
thanks everybody, i really apperciate it.
Title: Re: ESPN Rise: At work on the court
Post by: redstormhoopsfan on July 13, 2009, 11:23:43 PM
Nice job man, you've come a long way in the last few years. Keep up the excellent work, and good luck when you start school!

apperciate?
I know, it's Dave's fault for not installing a spell checker!   LOL